Tuesday, October 26, 2010
The cold equations
Marilyn woke up at 9:30 to go to work and on her way their took out a picture from her car glove department, looked at the picture of her and Gerry, and started to cry. She really missed him and wanted to go see him. And that's when she made her decision, she was going to go see Gerry. She was at work clean, and when no one was looking she snuck on the E[S shuttle. There she hid until during the flight the pilot heard something and in her direction. Her identity was exposed and he told her the consequences of being a stowaway. A few minutes later she talked to her brother on the dispatch and said her last goodbyes. Not scared anymore the captain blasted her out into space.
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Ms. Raquel said...
ReplyDeleteI don't think you read and/or understood the directions correctly.
You were supposed to include a topic sentence stating the name of the story, the current point of view, and the new point of view.
Then you had to share at least three details from the story and explain how each would be different if told from Marilyn’s point of view.
Finally, you were to end with a closing sentence that explains how point of view affects a story.
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