1. when i was 6 years old i was bit by a german shepered in the face at chollas lake in san diego.
2.when i was 13 the cops took the last thing i got from my dad my dog.
3.when i was 14 i smoked weed and thizzed with my sister.
4.in 07 i was taken from my dad and put in a group home called KATS.
5. when i was 13 and 14 i got abused alot so i got into gangs and drugs ect
6.when i was 14 i began drinking so much that i passed out in school
7.in 06 i was hit by a car and the driver kept going.
8.in 09 while i was a runaway i along with 20 other people broke into a school and stole a whole bunch of food,guitars, and money, but 2 weeks later someone snitched and everyone got caught except me,yet b4 i could get caught i turned myself in and only i ended up going to juvie.
9.after juvie when i was 15 i went to a foster home and ran away thus landing me in polinsky.
10.in 2010 After polinsky i was sent to SPA and found out it wasn't anything like they said on the tour and have hated it ever since.
Tamarquis, these sentences are missing proper punctuation and capitalization. :( These events are also missing conflict. Please read and follow directions carefully.
ReplyDeleteTamarquis your memorable things are interesting but need a little correction in punctuation.
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